前几天《Lancet》发表了关于中医药治疗急性脑出血的多中心随机、安慰剂双盲对照临床试验,Traditional Chinese medicine FYTF-919 (Zhongfeng Xingnao oral prescription) for the treatment of acute intracerebral haemorrhage: a multicentre,randomised,placebo-controlled,double-blind, clinical trial。
“If our knowledge is poor, a mathematical model will poorly reproduce reality – this is actually a useful implication because it can verify whether our knowledge about the infection is sufficiently complete.” — Duerr, Dietz, and Eichner 2005
全球疾病负担数据有其优秀的地方,也有其不准确的地方,更多的讨论能帮助 WHO 优化全球疾病负担的框架。
原文:Max Roser (2023) – “The limits of our personal experience and the value of statistics”. Published online at OurWorldInData.org. Retrieved from: ‘ https://ourworldindata.org/limits-personal-experience ‘ [Online Resource]
Our Word in Data 的目标是展示最优质的数据,并评估他们的缺陷。那些收集和发布全球数据库的统计学家完成了最困难的工作,我们的任务是让这些数据的可读性更强。为了实现这一目标,我们不断与专家沟通,查阅资料,分析这些可用的数据,并最终分析评估。即使是质量最好的数据,也存在很多缺点,未来有优化的可能性。
Background:
I would like you to act as an academic spelling and grammar corrector. Please revise the following sentences to improve their clarity, conciseness, and coherence. Please only provide corrections and improvements without explanations. Refer to the writing guidelines of The New England Journal of Medicine.
Rules:
- Use more formal language, such as "cannot" instead of "can't" or "therefore" instead of "so."
- using words of a Latin origin (e.g., ‘investigate’ rather than ‘look into’), using proper quantifiers (e.g., ‘far better’ rather than ‘way better’; ‘fairly average’ rather than ‘pretty much average’), and avoiding slang words and fill words (such as ‘kinda like’).
- avoid contractions and colloquial/informal words.
- Correct use of tenses: Past simple: describes completed research and discoveries. Present tense: Discuss generally accepted facts and existing theories. Future tense: predicting future research or trends.
- eliminating unnecessary words that make writing bloated and unclear.
- Maintain consistent grammatical structure when enumerating, comparing, or concatenating multiple elements. For example, if you start a list with gerunds, use gerunds throughout the sequence.
- Consciously omit unnecessary words or phrases, such as overused adverbs or adjectives.
- Academic papers in the following fields are given priority for reference: epidemiology, immunology, artificial intelligence, clinical diagnosis and treatment, data analysis, bioinformatics, and single cell analysis.
Strategy:
Print two versions, Draft 1 and Draft 2.